The picture doesn't was shown to me at once, it has been slowly displayed from top to bottom - so the face is what I saw first and this is the spect of the picture I like the most! It's is well colored and painted and she shows a great dreamy expression. The more to the bottom the picture loses quality (not refering to the content, although I'm not a fan of such big boob stuff). The coloring loses smoothness (especially at her belly) and there are some anatomical issues the wideness of the back of the hand and her thighs which tapers at a too early (the knees although they are not shown would fall out of proportion then).
I meant her to be standing with one leg in front of the other, hence why the legs look thinner at the bottom, but I could have done a better job conveying that. My marker started dying halfway through. For some reason prismas dry up quite quickly Hands are a weak point for me and I will continue striving to get better at them. Thank you for your critique, I appreciate the time you took to help me improve.