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It was a beautiful day in japamerica as you strolled gracefully down the street. Your flawlwess, beautiful, silky, flowing, radiant, magnificent locks glistened in the sun and your voluptious, fantastic, super  bodacious bod was making all the men within a 91928 mile radius fap themselves dry as every single woman on the planet hated you for being so perfect and smart and amazingly amazing.
Some player hatin' hoe tossed a bomb at you but you just whipped that shit away with your totally rockin' tits and it flew back incinerating her and a nearby building wich you walked away from in slow motion, too cool and baller to even bother looking back.
This only made Ludwig VanMeinKampf notice you and imediately fall in love.

"Ach du lieber!" He exclaimed, "I can't contain meinself!"

He ran to you also in slow motion as he ripped off his shirt exposing his perfectly rippling man muscles that were oiled up and shimmering sexily. You pretended not to be totally impressed by his fabulous super saiyan physique because that would make you look too desperate and it's not liek you were desperate at all because you're so hot that Jesus Christ had his second coming.
When he was close enough to you, he quickly regained his studly German seme composure and punched his penis repetedly so it wouldn't spring out of his pants. However, one look into your immaculate, sparkling, dazzling eyes snapped his unbreakable Gestapo control and he screamed "HOP ON MEIN SCHLONG!" as his mastadonic member tore through his lederhosen and punched Japan in the eye.

"DOSHITE!!?!" Japan shouts, cupping his now black eye. He then sees you standing there in your radiant glorious glory and totally forgets that he just got a face full of Germany's Bratwurst and dives into his Mitsubishi vehicle proceeding to drive as fast as he can towards you.
"NANI?? My smarr asian eyes make it so dificurt to see the road!"
Japan crashes into a crowd of streat performers but since he's Japanese, he karate jumped out of his vehicle before it exploded and did a cool martial artsy flip and landed next to you and Germany.
"NEIN!" shouts Germany as he steps between you and Japan who is already tearing of his kimono or whatever because he's soooo hot for you. "She is MEIN! We are in love!"
Japan wips out the katana he had shiethed up his rectum and points it at the  angry Doichlander.
"Me and (yourname)-san-chan-sama are destined for to being together! It was fortold in China's fortune cookie! DATTEBAYO!!!!" Just then China leaps into the scene armed with a deadly Hello Kitty embellished rifle. Japan and Germany gasp as China throws himself at your feet and begins stroking them affectionately.
"She have so small lotus feet! We must be wed!" Japan and Germany exchange angry but still very sexy and handsome expressions as they proceed to pull China away from you by his ponytail. You watch them wrestling in a big sweaty totally smexi man heap and yoink out your notebook writing down ideas for your next yaoi fanfiction. Just then, Russia comes charging down the street, pockets full of borscht!
"MY BEAUTIFUL YELDA!" he sings as he sweeps you into his big manly hunky Russian arms.
"SACREBLEU! Unhand my woman, you filthy salope!" France shrieks as he flings croisants, expertly striking Russia in his eyes and uses his baget to stab the offending man in the butthole.
As the other nations fight to the death for your love Italy who was spinning spaggetti noticed you and cryed tears of joy because his eyes had never beheld such a juicy ass. He jumped out of the 7th floor window of the building he was in and died. The friendly nation of Yakastonia witnessed this horrible tragedy and felt stricken with grief so he told himself a black joke to cheer up.
"I say, that's a mighty fine behind! Fancy a shag?" Brittain asked as he lept from the trolly he was riding.
"Piss off, you blooming barmpot!" yelled England from the top of Big Ben.
"Silence, you pillock!" Brittain cried as he exposed his hairy chest.
All of the very sexy men began shedding their clothing and struggling to make it to you to claim you as their one and only number one super special awesome chocolatey fudge coated ultra rare 1st edition LOVE!
"What the hell is that?" Said Germany between punches
"AIYAA!!" screamed China in fear
The epic music began to play as America flew through the sky naked with a jetpack spewing napalm from his dong. The other nations scrambled for cover but it was too late because AMERICA FUCK YEAH!
They all were caught in the firey deathsplosion.
America landed triumphently infront of you as hamburgers and fries began raining from the sky. He swung his huge massive gigantic American penis and cleared the street of the dead bodies of everyone else who was not American.

"I pledge alliegance TO DAT ASS!"
Tears welled up in your eyes as more romantic and beautiful words have never been spoken to you.
And in the end America wins because FREEDOM IS THE ONLY WAY, YEAH!
2013 update:
this mess has been up here for over a year and while everyone understood it was a parody and making fun of various fanfiction cliches, it is also meant to be satirical.
It was meant to call attention to the racist stereotypes casually featured in many fanfiction with non-American characters. I understand that Hetalia uses stereotypes for laughs but when people are writing serious stories and including those offensive stereotypes believing they are accurate portrayals of a culture it becomes problematic.
I think that message may have been lost with how absolutely ludicrous this story I wrote is.

Have fun with your fanfics but always strive to be original, do some research and spell check!
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This is one of the most funny- no... amazing- no... Hilarious things I have ever read. I am going to make all my friends read this. Just because it is that hilarious and funny. I was laughing like a retard, out loud the whole time I was reading this, and my parents were looking at me as if I was a retard, But I was like "Who cares! This thing is flipping amazing!" And, like the stupid american I am. I pledge allegiance to Dat Ass. But I'm me... So, I pledge allegiance to every ass. Because according to my friends I have an Ass Fetish. So. Yeah. But I'm sure Reader-Tan was flipping effin sexy.
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omg liek

dis is the best story i read in my life

i love you for writing this

will you marry me?

we can both grind up against all of the dead countries with america like "aww yee buddy, this shits for real home dog. we up in dis shit like christmas"

and like america will be like "awww shit, shit just got real up in this shit home dog. hero!"

then we will sit on his penis and fly away.

like a fire truckin bawses.
the end.

this is the best critique ever, your argument is invalid.

lol sfsdf
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Letuise Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
What..What... XD
Pinkett1314 Featured By Owner Nov 29, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can't stap laughing I'm just i couldn't even process this
HipsterChou Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2014  New member Student General Artist
I can't even. Best fanfiction ever. England (Laughing) [V3]  I love it. Cheers to you. Exo : Kai Laughing 
Kitty45612 Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2014
this has to be the best story I've ever read i can't stop reading dis shit 
all the men fap themselves dry?!!
s1mr4n Featured By Owner Nov 23, 2014
lol wut did i just read XD

i wanna be liek Reader-chan.......she seems cool.......not like mw though........ D:
hithereimspecial Featured By Owner Nov 22, 2014  New member
.... XD
DownShiftPlus Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2014  New member Student Artist
This. Was.
The most random and hilarious story I have ever
Antarctic-Circle Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2014  New member
That was so fucked up that it was awesome. Great job.
Filled witjed uncensored creativity.
crayolademigod Featured By Owner Nov 1, 2014  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
CreepyAnimeFreak02 Featured By Owner Oct 27, 2014  New member Hobbyist Traditional Artist
"I pledge allegiance to DAT ASS"
*dies of laughter*Guffaw Insane Laughter fella Laughing (Reactions) .: giggle :. Little Leo Generous, Honesty, Laughter, Kindness, Loyalty :gigglesnort: Yami Bakura evil laughter :cackle: Naruticon :teehee: Laughing Laughter bahaha My emotional hell Haha 
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